Panikeke is so yum delicious. It's so yummy it feels like there's a party in my mouth. It looks like a ball of cheese cake that has been deep fried. I take another bite it taste so good it feels like a bigger party in my mouth now. I really want to take another bite I finished it it was the best thing I ever had.
Thank you I well work on that.Thanks for being positive Marco
ReplyDeleteHi Caleb. Your writing was good but some of your sentences don't make sense. Next time try to edit your work. Nice way to make others know you like Panikeke. :) The 1st,4th and 5th don't make sense.
ReplyDeleteHi Caleb. I really really love how you described how it tasted saying it tastes like there it a party in your mouth I really love it. And you described how it looks really well I can see it in my head. Maybe next time say goodbye so we know if there will be another part to the blog. Have a nice day.
ReplyDeleteHi Caleb, I liked the way you described the panikeke. It reminded me of when I tasted a panikeke for the first time. Maybe next time you could check your punctuation. Have a great day :)
ReplyDeleteHi caleb,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you said how it feels.
It reminds me of when I tasted a panakaki.
Bye!